Thursday, March 15, 2012

The Tiny Drop


This was another day when pouring were the rains
This was another day when filled were the drains

This was another day when I would love to drench wet
And not come home until the sun was set

This was another day when all were contendors of a rat race
Were driving until crazy just to find some dry place

Underneath the shade, on a nearby leaf I saw something pop
Drawing my attention amidst chaos there rested a tiny Drop

Laid Behind it ,the Sunny rays were crowning it with the shimmering glow
Far away its Fellow mates were painting the wondrous rainbow

Deep in my thoughts I recalled its other friend whom I met as a morning dew
How I envisioned the shivering flowers were flaunting their marvellous hue

Come the gushing wind and the leaf may just bend
Or the gleaming rays may just lead the drop to its end

But still in the drops miniature life span
It would have learnt to be absorbed and fill the mighty ocean.

13 comments:

  1. Honest analysis - I think this one is better than the Hindi ones, keep on writing in english as well. Very nice thought...

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  2. Its beautiful! I could imagine and see the entire scene in front of me.

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  3. its light hearted so i like it ... no drama , no sadness just plain old joy of stepping in the rains.... good... :)

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  4. Awesome. So simple reminding the joy of rain and everlasting natural beauty. :D

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  5. a good picture created!! and beneath the simplicity of the scene and words, lies the deep meaning, which in today`s world most of us are overlooking-- the significance of apparently Insignificant!!
    a delightful read!!

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  6. Good one Pri. I really appreciate the change. I am now missing the like butten for comments and you know the reason for that. :) And you write good in English. So, keep writing in both languages.

    Cheers,

    -Sandesh Kulkarni

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  7. very nice , seems flower has got some new but more fertilized field.
    Keep contributing, waiting for some thought even deeper and touching...........
    All the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  8. hey thanks all for ur comments..i will try more in english..hope to improve on it.. :)

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  9. very nice....keep on writing in english also with hindi....

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  10. unique way to manifest the deep significance of life through natural beauty (with strong scientific basis :) )...

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  11. interesting background...abstract bt simple

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