This was another day when pouring were the rains
This was another day when filled were the drains
This was another day when I would love to drench wet
And not come home until the sun was set
This was another day when all were contendors of a rat race
Were driving until crazy just to find some dry place
Underneath the shade, on a nearby leaf I saw something pop
Drawing my attention amidst chaos there rested a tiny Drop
Laid Behind it ,the Sunny rays were crowning it with the shimmering glow
Far away its Fellow mates were painting the wondrous rainbow
Deep in my thoughts I recalled its other friend whom I met as a morning dew
How I envisioned the shivering flowers were flaunting their marvellous hue
Come the gushing wind and the leaf may just bend
Or the gleaming rays may just lead the drop to its end
But still in the drops miniature life span
It would have learnt to be absorbed and fill the mighty ocean.
Superb !
ReplyDeletesimply awesome...
Honest analysis - I think this one is better than the Hindi ones, keep on writing in english as well. Very nice thought...
ReplyDeleteIts beautiful! I could imagine and see the entire scene in front of me.
ReplyDeleteits light hearted so i like it ... no drama , no sadness just plain old joy of stepping in the rains.... good... :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome. So simple reminding the joy of rain and everlasting natural beauty. :D
ReplyDeletea good picture created!! and beneath the simplicity of the scene and words, lies the deep meaning, which in today`s world most of us are overlooking-- the significance of apparently Insignificant!!
ReplyDeletea delightful read!!
Good one Pri. I really appreciate the change. I am now missing the like butten for comments and you know the reason for that. :) And you write good in English. So, keep writing in both languages.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
-Sandesh Kulkarni
very nice , seems flower has got some new but more fertilized field.
ReplyDeleteKeep contributing, waiting for some thought even deeper and touching...........
All the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hey thanks all for ur comments..i will try more in english..hope to improve on it.. :)
ReplyDeletevery nice....keep on writing in english also with hindi....
ReplyDeleteunique way to manifest the deep significance of life through natural beauty (with strong scientific basis :) )...
ReplyDeleteinteresting background...abstract bt simple
ReplyDeleteGreat !!
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